Friday, September 19, 2014

Synthesis Essay (Draft 1.1)

Synthesis Essay
Draft 1
Hook: Is community service REALLY helpful for students? Especially when forced?
Address problem: Currently education systems are torn as to whether or not a certain number of community service hours should be required to graduate high school.
Thesis: Although community service is useful not only on applications, but also in real world experience, it should not be required for graduation, instead community service should be emphasized through in class learning, and the tools to complete community service should be readily available to students who wish to participate.
Order of Development: We will examine how the coerceing (not a word) of community service detracts from the experience that you receive and what should be offered to students.

Refutation
·       Community service gives a sense of community
·       Yes but it makes it so that kids don’t want to do it when they are older
·      Community service is good for applications
·      Yes but …
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