Synthesis Essay
Draft 1
Hook: Is
community service REALLY helpful for students? Especially when forced?
Address problem:
Currently education systems are torn as to whether or not a certain number of
community service hours should be required to graduate high school.
Thesis: Although
community service is useful not only on applications, but also in real world
experience, it should not be required for graduation, instead community service
should be emphasized through in class learning, and the tools to complete
community service should be readily available to students who wish to
participate.
Order of Development:
We will examine how the coerceing (not a word) of community service detracts
from the experience that you receive and what should be offered to students.
Refutation
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Community
service gives a sense of community
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Yes but
it makes it so that kids don’t want to do it when they are older
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Community service is good for applications
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Yes but …
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Support 1
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Support 2
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Support 3
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Call to Action
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